Wed 6 Feb 2008
I read an entry on MrEspy’s blog where he asked “How does one introduce oneself [to] or acclimate oneself with poetry? Also, how does one teach their children this lost art form?” to which one of his blogo-riffic buddies posted the response of his poetry professor. Her wisdom was thus expressed: “I think the first step to acclimating yourself to poetry is to become familiar with the poetic devices employed, which can seem boring, but when understood can make poetry much more intriguing.”
For your reading pleasure I will now proceed to (savagely) critique said opinion with my characteristic tact (or rather irreverence for institutional credentials like PhDs and those who hold them).
The recommendation of the professor represents the archetypal approach of the institutionalized psyche. To her, poetry is a discipline to be studied and dissected, categorized and graded. In her world, syllables are meticulously counted and an increasingly complex arcane technical vocabulary must be studied to approach poetry with sophistication. The world of poetry is the world of books, the literary dungeon of an archaic tradition kept alive almost exclusively in the halls of universities. All this represents a seething subtext of power, control and legitimacy. These “scholars” are the guardians of the Western tradition, the ones who determine what is or is not “great poetry,” the ones who determine what should be included in the canon of Western literature. They edit anthologies and divide them into chapters arranged in various contrivances; all of them inappropriate. The scholarly study of poetry can tell us much about its people but it would be too presumptuous to speak authoritatively on poetry itself. It belongs, after all, in the realm of the commons, a popular art, dare I say, a democratic one.
(Speaking of presumptuousness, the attentive reader will realize that much of the preceding paragraph was extremely presumptuous of this particular professor, who I will admit I know very little about, as well as the whole body of professional scholars of literature. Am I at all concerned about this seemingly hypocritical analysis? I am concerned with that just about as much as I am with the appropriateness this atrocious paragraph entirely enclosed, rather disgracefully, within parenthesis in violation of every principle of writing I can think of. Which is to say, I am not very concerned at all.)
So how can we understand the true nature of poetry? Is it what it has become in the modern West, as our professor friend understands it? If poetry’s historic role is fully grasped one would discover that it is an organic art form that flourishes in a community setting. It is emotional, personal, cultural and, at least for the vast majority of its practitioners; still, largely an oral tradition. Much of poetry is also about performance and thus expression is also tied to the manner of the author’s recitation. Every word and verse is given life through vivid inflections, tones and even elocution.
In order to demonstrate how this dynamic operates one can contemplate a play. Surely no one believes that plays should be read. Rather they are performed and thus infused with emotion, passion and life (at least if the actors are good). Consider a Shakespearean play in its archaic English. The language is notoriously difficult to penetrate for the untrained modern reader. But the modern spectator can still extract a great deal of meaning simply by observing the characters’ gestures, facial expressions and tone of voice. This also holds true for poetry. For example, ancient Greek schoolboys would recite and listen to the recitation of poetry with great enthusiasm. These boys, who were memorizing and studying Homer, did not understand the meanings of many verses due to the difficult language. Yet that did not prevent them from deeply appreciating these epics because the manner of their recitation evoked such powerful feelings. It can be imagined that the poems were delivered quite eloquently with dramatic gesticulations and sophisticated “voice acting.” Studying this poetry was also, more than an academic exercise. The poems they studied were part of the living cultural heritage of the Greeks and this literature embodied the deepest held values and greatest ideals of that society. These epic poems were part of the canon of a shared mythical history that could be referenced to evoke powerful emotions or invoke the example of heroes. They could even be quoted for as banal a reason as making a joke.
Throughout history and to the present day amongst certain traditional cultures, poetry has played a major, sometimes crucial, societal role. It is the medium through which news is shared, social norms are reinforced, the arrogant are humbled and even how disputes are resolved. The Inuit, for example, participate in drum duels where two parties settle their quarrel by insulting each other in verse to the accompaniment of drums. The audience and their reactions to the poetry decide the matter in favor of the more eloquent of the adversaries. This is not exactly justice but it is an illustration of the power and role poetry can take. One can imagine that eloquence in such a society would surely lead to great social advancement.
Once poetry is understood to have a social and thus a necessarily oral dimension we can more critically examine our honorable professor’s advice. Is the first step to acclimating oneself to poetry the study of its mechanics and poetic devices? Though I agree that doing so will lead one to have a more sophisticated understanding of crafting a poem it is certainly not the “first step” unless your goal is to forever alienate a child from poetry. Regarding directly teaching poetry to children it was wise of the questioner to first begin with himself. Indeed, the first step is to immerse oneself in poetry. But poetry must become a living tradition for it to thrive in any meaningful way. This means joining a poetic community or creating a poetic culture in your home or amongst a circle of like-minded friends. You certainly cannot transmit anything to your children if you do not yourself possess it.
The actual teaching of poetry to children is both possible and impossible depending on what you mean by teach. In my experience, poetry is a powerful tool for improving children’s literacy, vocabulary and pronunciation. But this is mainly through memorization of great poetry. Teaching children to write poetry is too much of a contrived exercise. The ancient Greeks believed that the capacity to write eloquent poetry could not be taught, rather, it was direct inspiration from the Muses that produced moving verse. The ancient Arabs believed that eloquence came from those possessed by jinn (otherworldly spirits). Though I would disagree with our ancestors to an extent, it is instructive to note that the same faculties that produce eloquent oratory or prose do not necessarily correspond with those that produce great poetry and the understanding of the ancients reflects this wisdom.
So what does the enthusiastic parent do? It is simply a matter of sharing their own immersion into poetic culture with their children. As they grow older, attending poetry recitals, hearing their family, neighbors, friends and role-models gushing poetry, they will naturally want to gain acceptance and renown in this community by composing their own poetry and sharing it. Children are very imitative creatures and all they need is a model to get them started. Keep in mind that human activities should always be useful, even if only subtly. For example, humor serves to entertain, bind people together in camaraderie, communicate criticism in a disarming way and even shame people into abiding by various social conventions. The more meaningful poetry becomes for a particular community the more enthusiastically one’s child will participate in it. From this engagement in poetry there will be a more natural progression from amateur dabbling to more dedicated study into the mechanics and devices employed by master poets. However, with sufficient exposure to quality poetry, most of what a novice would learn would simply be the names of things that she is already familiar with. This represents an advantage because the capacity to put a name to something is the first step towards controlling one’s own poetry and being able to imitate, experiment, innovate and manipulate personal style and expression.
Most importantly, the child’s attachment to poetry will grow naturally and out of genuine interest. But if the child disappointingly shows little or no interest in eloquent verse then they are free from benevolent parental authoritarianism which too often leads to the opposite of what was intended.
So is the first step towards appreciating poetry to learn poetic devices? I don’t know. I never got a PhD in poetry and it would be presumptuous of me to even try and answer.









February 7th, 2008 at 8:05 pm
Other than the uploaded image *lowers gaze*…the proposal is nicely written. What are your suggestions on ‘must read’ poetry for highschool/college students?
February 7th, 2008 at 11:01 pm
The picture I uploaded is that of a young boy with a flower in his mouth. It is not of a half-naked woman. Give me some credit.
As for “must read” poetry, that designation is very subjective. What I believe is great poetry could be reviled by someone else. If you want high school students to be interested in poetry expose them to your favorites and encourage them to branch out and explore their own interests. A good introduction might be to have them really analyze popular song lyrics (good ones at least). With poetry, or any non-revealed subject, its best not to force learning but let it come from genuine interest. This is the honest approach because this is how we learn as parents or teachers.
I am reluctant to suggest “must read” poetry because such a list would compromise the principles I described above but I will tell you off hand that I am a big fan of Emily Dickinson and one of my favorite works of all time is Ozymandias by Shelly. I also love the rhyme and rhythm of Poe’s the Raven.
February 8th, 2008 at 9:38 pm
Although I agree with your overall premise, but you mischaracterized both my opinion and that of the professor. The words I quoted were one line and not enough to reach a conclusion of “archetypal approach of the institutionalized psyche.”
The question was of “acclimation” to poetry which implies that the reader is not very inclined to poetry. Thus, the recommendation, when a person can’t seem to get into poetry, is to look for certain elements that the poet has carefully placed in there that attract a listener (i.e. rhyme and rythm). Then one can begin to hear and feel the other nuances that the poet brings.
Also, you seemed to ignore what I wrote in my entry, namely “Of course, these are simply devices that are meant to add eloquence to the poem, but the meat of the poem, for me anyway, always lies in the content and motifs.”
The mere structural dissection of poetry (as in an academic fashion), I agree, is not the where the heart of the poem lies. At the same token, for aspiring poets and current poets, it is a very important aspect of poetry the understanding which will continue to churn greater poets as time continues. So an en toto ignorance of the matter (simply b/c it is taught in an institutionalized setting) is pretty immature.
Overall, I agree with your premise so 5 stars for the content. 1 star for mischaracterization of the positions of whom you are attacking. So average 3 stars.
(Btw, in a debate, never mischaraterize your opponent’s position, b/c I can always turn and say “I dont’ believe that” hence ending the debate). Read Imam Ghazali’s preface to the Incoherence of the Philosophers, where he so eloquently and accurately sets up the position of his opponents and very careful not to mischaracterize it even the slightest. He did it so well, that his book was used in Europe as a tool to teach philosophy.
Anyway, nice to meet you. Who are you again?
February 9th, 2008 at 4:51 am
okay…I’m sorry!
February 11th, 2008 at 2:09 pm
Brother Tariq, I would first like to say that I love you for the sake of ALLAH and I really appreciate your comments.
Now to the matter at hand.
Regarding the idea that I may have somehow distorted the original opinion I will use your correction.
This is clearly what I am advocating against. The person who is seeking acclimation (rather than improving his own poetry) should not begin with looking for poetic elements rather he should begin by enriching himself in a poetic community or culture. So it seems that my “mischaracterization” is not that at all.
Related is your discussion of aspiring and current poets. This is clearly not what I was addressing. My topic was that of introducing oneself and one’s children to poetry. If an advanced poet wanted to improve his poetry I would neither recommend nor discourage them from studying poetry in an institutionalized setting. Rather I would strongly encourage them to seek out the best teacher they could find. If the only place he or she could be found is in a University then by all means they should study with them.
As for your comment on debating, it is excellent advice. However, I do not think it applies to me (at least not for this post anyway) considering my response. However, I will admit, from our private correspondence that it was certainly most presumptuous of me to make such judgments about your professor from one statement, though, I candidly confessed to this in the original post.
So I will remove the link to the professor’s site and take the stand alone comment as a symbol for the institutionalized psyche whether or not that happens to be the case, it serves as an important vehicle to get my point across.
Tariq, it was a pleasure.
February 19th, 2008 at 6:08 am
“I never got a PhD in poetry and it would be presumptuous of me to even try and answer.”
Looks like you think of PhDs the same way my dad does - Permanent head Damage
February 19th, 2008 at 3:32 pm
I’ll say that in MANY cases PhDs combine the two attributes that, separately are a problem, but together are irremediable; arrogance and ignorance.
You can still learn from an arrogant guy who knows his stuff and an ignorant guy who is humble can learn. But put the two together and you have someone with self-inflicted mental retardation walking around with his nose in the air.
February 28th, 2008 at 3:00 am
I have always thought of it as arrogance and insecurity, not ignorance, though given the kind of “knowledge” produced in some fields, it might as well be. Still, if you encounter relatively humble people who are also accomplished scholars, there is a great deal of benefit which can scarcely be found outside the academy.
February 28th, 2008 at 3:16 am
Insecurity? Musa you are more charitable than I.
Humble people who are accomplished scholars are certainly a treasure. Unfortunately, they are rare.
February 28th, 2008 at 6:18 pm
If it was insecurity on its own, that would be charitable, but insecurity mixed with arrogance is a volatile combination. That is what leads to such dramatic personality defects among many university professors. It is particuarly disastrous for young students who have good, unconventional insights but remain rough around the edges. In many ways, that was the story my undergraduate experience. Graduate school was better, alhamdulillah.